User:Zes9f9/Discrimination against transgender men/RaeStecker Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Discrimination against trans men by zes9f9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zes9f9/Discrimination_against_transgender_men?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Discrimination against transgender men

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far there is not much to review on any drafts. The bibliography and the sandbox have not been edited as far as I can see. However, for comments on additions or edits to the article there are a few I found.

The subsections that are currently laid out are good choices of topics to focus on. There is good range especially when it comes to transmisogyny and transmisandry. The sections outline medial discrimination and social discrimination well so far, but could use more information. The lead is decent and covers enough information for the summary but still it could use editing. The subheadings already in place are well written but there could be more information added. If there were specific cases of transmisandry that could be mentioned and explored in the subheadings that would be beneficial to the article. Other than this, there isn’t much to review.