User:Zfelis/Fishing Lake Metis Settlement/JuanSanchezHist15A Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Zfelis)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zfelis/Fishing Lake Metis Settlement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fishing Lake Metis Settlement

Evaluate the drafted changes
While you did a good job of paraphrasing the first article, I feel you should make sure the whole article stays formal and has as neutral tone/writing style as possible. You should copy and paste some of your writing in grammarly to fix some of these writing mistakes.


 * You should also make sure to copy and paste the pictures and info boxes of the original article as it gives valuable data/context about the area you are talking about
 * Maybe add just more photos about your topic since it is based on an area so the general public gets an understanding about the environment.

Make sure to include a lead, or a sort of introduction paragraph about the article which gives a general overview about the article.

For your title and headlines of each section of information, make sure to bold them so they look like a regular Wikipedia article.


 * Make sure to eventually change the (Article Draft) to the subject you are talking about as the article's title

I am unsure if you are already doing this, but try to find more information about your topic as it seem very short for each section.


 * I recommendation maybe combine some of the section since some of them do not seem so necessary to have a whole section about them (such as Historical Background and events & Location and climate)
 * Most of the sources seem reliable

For the information, maybe add some references if you believe would be useful for the reader to have a good understanding of the area


 * (Elizabeth Métis Settlement) Example of what I am talking about
 * For your 8th references (Making History. Our Land. Our Culture. Our Future. Metis Settlements General Council. p. 13.), there is no link so maybe try to find a possible link.
 * You might want to also added some external links for terms that general audiences would be unfamiliar with (like Cree and the Métis Rebellion)