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June 28: Great job! I can see your published edits!

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Okay, thanks Zach. I can see your work now on this. (June 27)

Assignment 17:

Stub article

Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board


 * 1) I chose this article because its the first stub article that actually looked like it could be expanded upon. Unlike most other stub articles where they're stubs because there is just no information on the subject, this one looked like it just needed some expanding and citations.
 * 2) At the bottom of the page it says that the article is a stub article and you can help by expanding upon it.
 * 3) With this stub the biggest issue is the fact that there are no citations. Also the article lacks a section expanding upon the powers of the organization, also there is no section saying what this organization has done. The main improvement that could be made is by giving a history of the organization and including citations.
 * 4) There are no references.
 * 5) The only thing that this article has is an introduction. It's missing history, events, responsibilities, and the reach of the organization.

Assignment 18:

Stub article top 3

Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board

Waffle Crisp

Hitler and the Occult (book)

Assignment 19

Waffle Crisp

There doesn't seem to be any guides that I could find that are appropriate for "brand-name food products"

To compare it I'm using the article Trix (cereal) as its another cereal article. The Waffle Crisp article seems to be missing a couple of things in comparison. Primarily the structure is off, the article doesn't have a section describing the history of the product and it also lacks citations in some of its sections.

https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/brands/

List of All Post Cereal Brands. Post Consumer Brands. (2021, June 9). https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/brands/.

Assignment 20

Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board

Source one

https://www.dnfsb.gov/about

Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board. About the DNFSB | Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board. (n.d.). https://www.dnfsb.gov/about.

Source two

https://www.usa.gov/federal-agencies/defense-nuclear-facilities-safety-board

Defense Nuclear Facilities Safety Board. USAGov. (n.d.). https://www.usa.gov/federal-agencies/defense-nuclear-facilities-safety-board.

Assignment 21

Waffle Crisp

Source 1

https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/brands/

List of All Post Cereal Brands. Post Consumer Brands. (2021, June 9). https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/brands/.

Source 2

https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/news/waffle-crisp-return/

Post Waffle Crisp® Cereal is Back! Post Consumer Brands. (n.d.). https://www.postconsumerbrands.com/news/waffle-crisp-return/.

Assignment 22

The main plan is to create a new section outlining the history of the cereal from the creation, to the end, and now the return of waffle crisp. I'm also going to find citations for the other section missing citations.

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Assignment 23

Waffle Crisp Improvement

Return
In January of 2021, Post made the decision to return Waffle Crisp's to market. The companies senior associate brand manager, Joe Woodward, stated that fans of the cereal had expressed great interest in Waffle Crisp's even after its discontinuation in 2018. Post Foods helped promote the return of the cereal by sending out samples of the new Waffle Crisp to social media influencers ahead of its relaunch. This action by Post follows as part of their decision to reintroduce some of their old brands, which can be seen with the return of the Oreo O's Cereal.

"Post Waffle Crisp® Cereal is Back!". Post Consumer Brands. Retrieved 2021-06-28.

Waffle Crisp has Returned, retrieved 2021-06-28