User:Zha Zha La/Donna Auston/Fedjinev Peer Review

This is a lovely article with neutral language! I love the sections you've decided on. In the education section, the very last sentence that says "during the #BLM", I'm wondering if freedom summer or a year timeline, or during the BLM protest could work there as well. How did the team decide when to use full name versus just last name? Maybe having a rule of thumb that can be standardized cross the article or across sections. Currently I'm not sure if there's a reason last name is used only for some and full name in similar paragraph forms. For example, the activism, Award recognition, and personal life all start by referencing Auston, so maybe all of them can start the same way? In reference to Auston's daughter, maybe when referring what school she goes to, you could use her last name instead of starting the sentence with "she" because usage of she almost made me think it was in reference to Auston so a little change could clear that right up.

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