User:Zha Zha La/Donna Auston/Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZhaZha LaLa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Zha Zha La/Donna Auston
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) none
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) none

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is a great start, I think that it could be expanded to give an overview of what her work is about/has contributed to scholarship overall. What kind of interventions does her work make? Also in that opening section you can add links to other wiki pages--I think she is on the list of Black Anthropologists so she can be linked there.

It is well organized. Tone is neutral and balanced. (have there been any critiques of her work? probably not yet)

There are enough secondary sources to establish her notability, and her top 100 award also solidifies this. However, I would also be a bit more explicit about what the secondary articles are noting about her--so you could write something like On "PBS Program Thirteen Media with Impact" and then note more about what she said there and what was said about her, so that it links the high quality source with claims that you are making.

I think your next steps are to read more of her work, fill in the selected publications a bit more. Maybe add something on her dissertation--you can just read the abstract and write a short summary. For a stub this is a great start!