User:Zha Zha La/Donna Auston/Squinard Peer Review

Peer Review
This is a good start. The lead is just the right length, however in the lead is the first major problem. You say Austin has been talked about on several news outlets, but then do not provide sources to those outlets and the specific publication. This will end up happening in several places, usually at the end of a paragraph. The content of the piece is seems to be in it's early stages, but regardless I think you are doing a good job finding different topics within Austin's life. Perhaps just expanded all that you currently have would be a whole article. Also good job organizing the subjects. The tone is good, it appears very neutral. Maybe consider adding a section on positive and negative criticisms of her work. All the links are working, but again the source list leaves something to be desired. I think it still is a bit of a stub, but I can see where you are going with this and I look forward to the final result.