User:Zha Zha La/John L. Jackson Jr./Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zha Zha La


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zha%20Zha%20La/John_L._Jackson_Jr.?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great start!

The section that you have labeled as introduction should just go at the top as the "Lead" and you can take out the introduction heading. The inforamtion in the lead section is good, but maybe its a bit too broad right now and should include some facts about Jackson--eg where does he work? what does he do? those kinds of things. Like on other bio pages. Some of the info in the lead section needs to be updated--eg "Racial Paranoia: The Unintended Consequences of Political Correctness" is no longer his latest book. Also he can just be referred to as Jackson not Dr. here.

Try to create a content box and an info box like the Faye V. Harrison page--Faye V. Harrison.

Expand your sections--include personal life, awards, what institutions has he been affiliated with, a section with the organizations and boards he has served on.

Link to relevant wikipedia pages as well.

In addition to just listing his publications you will want to include a section on his major works where you detail what each one has been about--again similar to Harrison and other scholars

keep working!