User:Zha Zha La/John L. Jackson Jr./Jo.joh.371 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zha Zha La, Achebbi, Janice.christell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * John L. Jackson Jr. - Wikipedia


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead is very short, and since it is a biographical article, it might be helpful to add a little more information to that. The tone and balance are good (it's a biographical article so it's hard to have a certain tone anyway). The content seems up-to-date, but the most recent date for anything was in 2019, so I'm not sure if there's more stuff that he's done recently or if that is actually the most recent thing. The sources are all good, and it's well-organized. There aren't any images. Since this is a new article, there are definitely a few good sources of the information. Given the amount of content, there's a pretty exhaustive list of sources as well. The article has a very good start, but I think a lot more has to be done for this type of article as well.