User:ZhengfangZhou/Meroë Head/Ibaker5 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zhengfang Zhou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZhengfangZhou/Meroë_Head?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have a lot of really good information here. My concern is that it may be a little bit too much information. I would maybe focus on one section of the Wikipedia page to update so you can throughly delve into an aspect of its grounding. Your section on excavation seems very relevant to the topic of grounding. It would be interesting to hear more about the watercolors depicting the head. The section with theories is interesting but may not be well suited for Wikipedia, since its supposed to be straightforward encyclopedic writing. Maybe if you wanted to keep that section in you could discuss the academic history of those theories and directly mention the scholarly work in the writing.