User:ZhengfangZhou/Meroë Head/Srmcg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZhengfangZhou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZhengfangZhou/Mero%C3%AB_Head?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Meroë Head

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how concise your contributions are. You did a good job at simplifying the varying theories about the Head to explain their basic argument and the most important evidence. There is good background information given about Meroe and its relationship to the Romans in the Theories section, but I’d suggest moving it up earlier so readers immediately have that context for the work. Each theory is given equal consideration. Contradictions are pointed out where it’s important to do so. Some sections have less citations than others, specifically Production and Provenance. There should be a citation for the fact that many bronze statues were destroyed. Your work is well organized, which prevents any one section from being too dense, but I think the "Excavation" title could be changed to something like "The Temple," since that's what it focuses on. Additionally, I think the "Additional Context" section could be consolidated into the "Theories" one before it.