User:Ziribilla/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Constitution of Lebanon

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is an important article to understand Lebanese politics, since most of its sectarian organization derives from the Constitution. However, my first impression was that the article is incomplete, more like scattered information with no order nor clear relevance.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead (and only) section is not clear:

- the first paragraph has not all the relevant information, while it displays some less relevant information (article 11: official language)

- content is missing: it is addressed one of the most relevant issues (article 24: Confessionalism), but it overlooks other parts of the Constitution

- it fails to give a background to either the Constitution itself and the articles cited

- there is no apparent logic behind the choice of articles displayed (except article 24)

The sources used are few and I am unsure of their reliability (except for the constitutional text itself)

The article is not at all organized, though the language used and the tone are good.

Overall I think the article lacks in content (and thus in organization), however it makes good use of wikilinks so it is still able to direct the reader to good and more complete information. I believe there is much that can be done to further develop the article, now it is more of a draft.