User:Zitong Lin1996/Rare-earth element/KaylaCarleton Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Zitong Lin1996
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Zitong Lin1996/Rare-earth element

Lead
The lead has not been updated to include edits, however it is clear and concise. The lead has a clear introductory sentence. The lead does not include a brief description of the article's major sections. The lead containes no information that is not present within the article. The lead describes the content well and is easy for someone with no experience to understand.

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic & up to date.

Tone and balance evaluation
The content added is neutral and not skewed. The addition of a larger worldview of the repercussions rare earth elements can have on humans.

Sources and References
Information is sourced to recent articles (2014 - 2016), source links appear to work.

Linked after this comment are some suggested articles that are very recent (2020)

Organization
There are some grammatical/wording issues. Namely "a research" does not seem to flow well. Perhaps something like "A 2015 study" or just "Research done in 2014".

Overall impressions
This is a strong start. I was excited when I saw someone was working on Rare earth elements as I have been very curious about them ever since I watched Pacific Rim 2. I really liked the addition of environmental impacts from non-western countries this section could be expanded even further.