User:Zjhjeremy/Shiba Inu/Qaniaf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zjhjeremy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zjhjeremy/Shiba Inu


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shiba Inu

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * You seem to not have worked on anything at all for this article
 * The article looks like it already included a lot of information so maybe it might be hard to find new ones
 * Some suggestions might be:
 * Talk about the health issues that often happens to a Shiba Inu (can be put under the Health section)
 * Add an "Etymology" section where it talks about the origin of the names, because the name itself sounds Japanese so maybe you can discuss further about that


 * As for sources, I stumbled upon several Shiba Inu studies
 * Try looking for them in the Wiley Online Library
 * Find notable magazines that discusses dog breed
 * Maybe also interviews with owners of this dog breed so you can get a first-hand source