User:Zjopiniano/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Kubota Garden

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I grew up going to Kubota Garden and it's a place that holds meaning to my family and I. It matters because with the many changes going on in South Seattle neighborhoods (especially in correlation to gentrification), I think it's important to appreciate the historical sites that are still there and emphasize the impact they have had on the community. My preliminary impression of the article is that there is not enough information about the agriculture of the site and there are many other detailed facts and events that the article does not cover.

Evaluate the article
I think the article for Kubota Garden has a solid foundation, but there is lots of room for improvement and evaluation.

For example, some things that could be added to create more depth and detail are:

- More pictures of the cite-- in particular, pictures from different seasons

- A section entitled "Agriculture" that goes into depth about the different plants, trees, flowers, etc. that grow within the cite

- A section entitled "Events" that explains the different occasions that occur on the cite -- weddings, photoshoots, etc.

- A section entitled "Wildlife" that illustrates the different animals that can be found on the cites

- (Maybe) A section that discusses the upkeep of the cite and the ways in which they keep the grounds groomed and family-friendly all year round

- (Maybe) A section about the correlation between mental health and nature

I believe the article is definitely at a starting point, but could use more analytical information, facts, and a variation of imagery.