User:Zmarks1/Obiora Udechukwu/Newdaecreations Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This group has a good bit of information and a good start on editing their article, however, I believe that there can be significant improvement in the organization of the article. There are a few syntax and grammatical errors that make the article hard to follow.