User:Zmbashir/Women’s Center For Legal Aid and Counseling (WCLAC)/Yshaye Peer Review

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User:Zmbashir
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 * User:Zmbashir/Women’s Center For Legal Aid and Counseling (WCLAC)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
An introductory sentence is concise and describes the article's topic accurately. While the Lead includes a good overview of what the organization does, it could do better in providing an overview of the sections that will be included in the article. All information in the Lead is present and relevant for the article.

All content thus far included in the article is relevant and important for the topic. The content is up to date and covers a wide range of history that is vital in understanding the organization and its origins. This article deals with the gender equity gap in Palestine and discusses the inequalities, violence, and suffering Palestinian women endure.

The article centers heavily on the suffering of Palestinian women and the difficulties they face, emphasizing the importance of this organization. However, the objective of the organization that this article is about was established in order to combat these struggles, so it is important context.

The sourcing and citations need a lot of improvement. There are no linked sources or hyperlinks as of now, however there are a few notes of citations that I presume need to be linked. As such, aside from the few noted sources, there is no way to check if all of the information in this article is accurate or can be backed up by sources.

The content is well-written, well-organized, and is grammatically correct. There are no added images or media at this time.

It seems that this article is in fact supported by multiple reliable secondary sources. However, there is no overarching list of sources and citations included in the article. The article does have section headings, but may need a little more structural improvement to appear like a typical article (larger section headings, etc.). There are no current hyperlinks, but the group has included notes to add in specific hyperlinks, so this should be fulfilled.

This article overall is very informative and addresses a significant topic. The information is well written and expansive. Just a few minor edits and adding in the proper citations is necessary.