User:Znoble/sandbox

Heather's Comments
10/15- Good work! You were supposed to make changes to the sandbox space in case there was any issue with plagiarism, I could catch it before Wikipedia editors did. But I see you wrote directly on the Wanda Lesisz page. No matter now, but please fix these two things:


 * this became her new life and in such, she got a job as a newspaper distributor. (caps and "as such")
 * In this line define what a jumper is. Also, not caps for "jumper" I think:  She also assisted an English Jumper who lived with them for a short amount of time but was later apprehended and killed.

When you finish the paragraph on her nursing career (with citations, if possible) post it below and I'll give feedback. Keep up the great work!

Ziyanna's Sources
1. (“Wanda Lesisz ‘Irena.’” Muzeum Powstania Warszawskiego, 21 Aug. 2008.)

This link is to a site that was able to sit and interviwe Wanda Lesisz about who she is and her contributions to the second world war.

2.(Gutowska-Lesisz, Wanda. Oberlangen: Stalag V1.C: 1944-45: Pamiectnik Akaczki. Polska Fundacja Kulturalna, 1989.)

Wanda wrote a book about her personal experiences which allows us to get first hand information about her life. Though because it is a book, I will need to go trhough and find exserts from it to properly give the readers on the page meaningful and helpful ideas of Wanda.

3. (“Stalag VI-C.” Wikipedia, Wikimedia Foundation, 26 Sept. 2019, en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stalag_VI-C.)

This is another page from wikipedia that is about the women prison camp where Wanda was in at one point during her fight for independec and freedom. I think that it is important to talk about not only Wanda as a person but also to discover where her efforts took her.

4. (“The Polish Heritage Society UK.” Obituaries, www.polishheritage.co.uk/index.php?option=com_moofaq&view=categories&id=18&Itemid=184.)

Written on a polish website under "obituaries" and it gives in slight detail a cover of her life specifically her time during the war.

5. (“Beach Jumpers.” Wikipedia, Wikimedia Foundation, 7 Oct. 2019, en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beach_Jumpers.)

Explaination of what a Jumper is through another wikipedia page.

 WORK LOG: 

October 6th: Wrote 2 paragraphs about her back story and the beginning to the start of her resistence fight (1.5 hours)

October 7th: added 2 citations to my work (30 mins)

October 8th: found 2 sources (20 mins)

Otober 10th: Started new paragraph about her nursing career