User:Zoe.Pierson050/Media transparency/Ndongh10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zoe.Pierson050


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zoe.Pierson050/Media transparency
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media Transparency
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media Transparency

Evaluate the drafted changes
- So far no lead or content has been added. One sentence/ paragraph a time does aid in building the page overtime.

- No sources have been added to the page, I recommend adding sources as you find them to avoid last minute add-in.

- No pictures. I suggest a cartoon picture from an old newspaper to support the article.

- A lot of quotations added