User:Zoe3440/Mid-Holocene Hemlock decline/Cornelius-Nic Peer Review

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User:Zoe3440
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Zoe3440/Mid-Holocene Hemlock decline
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This article houses cool information that is of importance to tree population in North America. Here are ways I think will help improve it: consider stating briefly the characteristics of the mid-Holocene period (e.g. high/low temperature, insect population increase etc.) in the first paragraph. Also, mention some traits of Tsuga canadensis. That way it will be easier to understand what factors affected eastern hemlock population decline. Also, keeping it open given that different authors have contrasting views to the causes of the decline.

Also, consider getting more references to support your information.