User:Zoepagomenakis/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cultural Assimilation

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I am very interested in learning about creating a more interconnected, adverse society and being able to learn specifically how other culture groups expect others, outside of their in-group to adapt and accept the norms within the culture. If this is successful, cultural assimilation will create a decrease in discrimination and will allow out-groups to become more familiar with appropriate ways to accept a culture groups' norms, values, feelings, behaviors, etc.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead paragraph includes a clear introductory sentence that accurately reflects the article's topic. The article's content overall is concise and up to date, however the tone and balance is not neutral at times. This article is structured well, including sections reflecting the major points of the topic, with minor spelling errors. The article could use more photos to give a greater overall status of the topic. This article can be improved by including citations as needed and adding more relevant information (not going on tangents or steering away from the topic) to add more credibility.