User:Zollila/sandbox

== Comments from Heather == 9/25- Lashelle, this is a great choice to update because of your interest in medicine! I moved your comment over to "User Page" instead of "Talk" page and added these headings as well. You should add a few more things: a work log with dates, a list of sources for Constance Stone, and portions of the article that you're going to improve, so you can edit them in your Sandbox before they go live. Make sense?

10/4- I can't tell what you've done since last week. Can you please update your work log below? You also need to list your references that you'll use to help improve the article. Let me know if you need help!

What I'll improve
The article I chose to edit is about Constance Stone. She was the first woman to practice medicine in Australia. It states that it is a preliminary article with room for improvement. From what I have read there is quite a bit of information missing in the article starting with her early life going into her career. It doesn't go in to much detail of why she chose to study and practice medicine, what type of medicine she practiced or what type of specialty she studied and why, and more about her personal life and how it relates to her medicine career. I will look into finding some resources that will help fill in these missing details. I will see if I can find anything under Constance Stone at the library or anything that is related that can help.