User:Zonghangli/Bollywood/Achilles' spiel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zonghangli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zonghangli/Bollywood?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hindi cinema
 * Hindi cinema

Evaluate the drafted changes
The user's contributions to the existing article provide a new perspective on Hindi cinema. The user's article contains suggestions that would suggest that it may be leaning towards a certain viewpoint, as if possibly convincing the reader that women in Indian cinema are portrayed positively. With the addition of references and more neutral language, the user's addition will be an important perspective to consider.