User:Zorabissell/Congregational mosque/Kentwpeters Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zorabissell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Congregational mosque
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Congregational mosques function as a community space. As a community space, it allows for prayer and social engagement. Congregational mosques have a crucial role in communities Islamic practices. However, when examining similarities and differences between congregational mosques, regional architectural influence is evident. In-part this is due to the fact that the Quran does not state architectural parameter for the congregational mosque. Durring Friday prayer, the congregation mosque has to accommodate all male members of the community. Population varies from region to region, meaning that the each region has to accommodate a different number of people, so each congressional mosque has a different scale.

Zora, I am impressed with what you added to the article and I think that the information you added is important and it improves the article. In terms of feedback, I'll start with just a few grammatical details. In your 3rd sentence, communities should have an apostrophe. Additionally, there is a typo with the word "Durring" instead of "During" at the beginning of one of your sentences. I suggest you look through your edits one more time and look for grammatical errors. In regards to your added content, I think you did a good job discussing the function of congregational mosques. However, I would have liked to see a little more information about the architecture of congregational mosques. Overall, I think that your additions are written in an unbiased tone which is very good. Additionally, you back up all of your claims with your sources, which are well used and they all appear to be relevant to the content you discuss. I'm unsure if your first source listed is cited properly, so I suggest looking at it again because it appears far too long for any source when I am looking at it in the references list. For your other sources, Wikipedia suggests that you add some more information to them, so I suggest doing that. Overall, the section you have added is easy to read and well organized. Based on your edits, along with some of these recommended changes I feel that your article is great. Overall good job!