User:Zorabissell/Congregational mosque/Lucymcginnis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zorabissel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zorabissell/Congregational_mosque?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Congregational mosque

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article has a lot of info! The architecture and function section of the article is neutral and very straightforward. Make sure you add the ' in Qur'an (I forgot to do this) but overall the paragraph flows nicely and doesn't need grammatical edits. Every sentence is cited which is good and all of the sources look neutral. In this section you could maybe add sentences about the function of the qibla, masqura, mirhab, and other architectural elements about congregational mosques that make them unique to Islam. Overall, this section is really good and let me know if you have any questions about my suggestions!