User:Zpana44/Down the Rabbit Hole (memoir)/GIlbertja Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zpana44


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Down the Rabbit Hole (memoir)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Down the Rabbit Hole (memoir)

Lead
The lead sentence is concise and accurately reflects the new information added to the article, cleaning up needless information stated before.

Content and Organization
The content has been reorganized in an easier to read format. I would suggest making references to other Wikipedia articles to hyperlink the word itself instead of listing it as a reference. The content is up to date. The specific paragraph speaking on Madison's reasoning for writing the novel contains some bias that could be reworded to still get the same point across. In the 3rd paragraph the word "published" needs a spellcheck. The Characters section has me wondering is that characters from the novel itself or the article? clarification here will help.

Overall Impressions
Overall you have done a good job adding references, reorganizing the articles information. I believe you are on track to making this article more useful to Wikipedia community. cleaning up a spelling error and some rewriting to avoid bias will get this article to where it should be. Also finding some new information for the article itself maybe amount of copies sold, was it ever a best seller?(says so in original article) could bring about productive changes!