User:Zpeeran/Epidemiology of attention deficit hyperactive disorder/Egraham1001 Peer Review

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Hi, I just copied your edits and my revisions are in BOLD. Biggest revisions: change prevalence to frequency - easier to understand. Remove blatant references to studies instead just make a statement with a reference unless actively comparing two perspectives.

Additionally - it might be good to add what extent these are treated in each country. What is their primary medication of choice. Is this under or overtreated

Asia
The estimated frequency of childhood ADHD in Asia is less than 5% The estimated frequency of adult ADHD is 25.66% in the South-East Asia Region and 9.67% in the Western Pacific Region.

China
Utilizing data from the WHO World Mental Health (WMH) Surveys, it is estimated that the prevalence of childhood ADHD in China (Shenzhen) to be 0.7% and the adult ADHD frequency to be 1.8%. for adults in China (Shenzhen) with existing ADHD, 62.8% had a history of childhood ADHD. estimated the prevalence of childhood ADHD in China, Hong Kong, and Taiwan to be 6.3%, with the individual regions exhibiting prevalences of 6.5%, 6.4%, and 4.2% respectively. Variability in the ADHD prevalences for children in China can be attributed to differences in study methodology, socioeconomics, and dates of data collection.

India
The frequency of childhood ADHD in India is 7.1%, with individual studies estimates ranging from 1.30% to 28.9%. Male children in India exhibited a slightly higher frequency of ADHD 9.40% compared to 5.20% in female children. Overall, ADHD prevalence in India does not differ significantly from the global prevalence, but there can be additional stigma associated with mental disorders in India leading to .....

South America
. The estimated frequency of childhood ADHD in South America is 11.8%. This is not significantly different from North America, Europe, Oceania, or Asia. The childhood ADHD prevalences for Colombia, Peru, and Brazil are 1.2%, 0.8%, and 2.5% respectively, while the adult ADHD prevalences for Colombia, Peru, and Brazil are 2.5%, 1.4%, and 5.9% respectively.