User:Zseok/Chunghi Choo/AYen3013 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zseok


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zseok/Chunghi Choo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Missing the Lead section- gives a concise overview of the artist's contribution.

Content

The content are relevant. However, needs more information about the artist's mid to late career. Would also be nice to introduce some of their notible works as well. Could add more context to each relationship.

Tone and Balance

Tone is neutral and doesn't seem biased

Sources and References

lacking citation and references within the article.

Organization

Seem to be using a chronological approach, hence easy to read.

Images and Media

No photos available yet. Can possbily add external link to a photo.