User:Zseok/Chunghi Choo/Jentxmgtd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Zseok/Chunghi Choo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zseok/Chunghi_Choo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chunghi Choo

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: (In the current version of the article)

Content:


 * Should make the Early Life section a bit more concise?

Tone & Balance:


 * Neutral.

Sources:


 * Need to add citation for the informations.

Organization:


 * Need to fix the grammars.