User:Zuleidaguirre/Sport psychology/Hhavenh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zuleidaguirre


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zuleidaguirre/Sport psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes are relevant to the topic of sports psychology. The drafted change that appears as the first sentence of the article flows well. It makes sense as a first sentence and leads into the next sentence well. The citations look good. The added information about the history of sports psychology is done in a timeline. This is an interesting add that I do enjoy, however, it doesn't seem to flow well with the rest of the article. The rest of the article included paragraphs and not a timeline of information. I think turning that section into a paragraph would help the flow and organization of the drafted changes.