User:Zurcnhoj/Heavy menstrual bleeding/Hschmidt2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cameronn19, Brandongo60, Zurcnhoj


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Heavy menstrual bleeding
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Heavy menstrual bleeding

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction is very clear and provides a good summary of the information to follow. The article overall has a comprehensive review of diagnosis and treatment for HMB. I think it could benefit from more clarity regarding which treatments align with which cause, since there are many causes of HMB i.e. the more intense treatments like surgery are usually for only certain pathologic causes and you would not do hysterectomy for PCOS.

The first half of the "Considerations" section is well fleshed-out, but the 5 last bullet points could use some explanation around why/how those cause HMB.

Finally, this article could hugely benefit from use of gender neutral language to include all people who menstruate.