User:Zurcnhoj/Heavy menstrual bleeding/Leonardo8910 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cameronn19, Brandongo60, Zurcnhoj


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zurcnhoj/Heavy_menstrual_bleeding?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Heavy menstrual bleeding

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Love the structure. Very clear.

Suggestions:

Some sources are not appropriate:


 * Source 3 is from a journal article, not textbook or meta analysis
 * Source 7 same thing: Sentence also feels oddly placed.. not sure if needed bc article is about HMB not AUB "Approximately 53 in 1000 women are affected by AUB."

Under meds, could be good to discuss contraindications to any (might be too much though)

Really appreciate how concise, really accessible information, very high yield considering how common AUB/HMB are.