User:Zverdin/Membrane transport protein/Tkeogh11 Peer Review

General info
zverdin
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Membrane transport protein

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Section:


 * Updated Content: The Lead provides an adequate summary, but should include the significance and diversity of membrane transport proteins, their implications in health and disease, and roles in drug delivery and biotechnology.
 * Introductory Sentence: Clear and concise, accurately describing membrane transport proteins.
 * Major Sections Brief: Should be expanded to provide an overview of the article's major sections, including molecular mechanisms, practical applications, types, examples, and pathology.
 * Extraneous Information: No extraneous information is present.
 * Conciseness: Concise, but lacking detail on the article's structure.

Content:


 * Relevance: Relevant, covering different aspects, including types and examples.
 * Currentness: Appears up-to-date; however, continuous advancements may require regular updates.
 * Completeness: Could benefit from more detailed explanations and inclusion of recent discoveries.
 * Technical Accuracy and Depth: Expand explanations of molecular mechanisms.
 * Latest Research: Include recent advancements in the field.

Tone and Balance:


 * Neutrality: Neutral and factual.
 * Bias and Representation: No apparent bias; article sticks to scientific facts.
 * Viewpoints Representation: Balanced perspective, not favoring any particular viewpoint.

Sources and References:


 * Reliability and Accuracy: Uses reliable sources, including scientific journals and educational websites.
 * Source Thoroughness: Could benefit from more diverse scientific references and recent studies.
 * Currency and Diversity: References are current but could include more recent studies.
 * Link Functionality: Functional links.

Organization:


 * Writing Quality: Clear and informative.
 * Grammatical Accuracy: No significant grammatical errors.
 * Structural Organization: Well-structured; could benefit from individual subsections for each transport protein type.
 * Visual and Interactive Elements: Incorporate diagrams, animations, or interactive models.

Images and Media:


 * Includes relevant images; consider adding more to enhance understanding.

Practical Applications:


 * Medical and Biotechnological Relevance: Add a section detailing medical applications and biotechnological roles.

Overall Impressions:


 * Quality Improvement: Informative, but could be improved with more recent research and detailed explanations of significance and applications.
 * Strengths: Clear explanations and use of reliable sources.
 * Areas for Improvement: Expand the article to include recent advancements, applications in medicine and biotechnology, and more accessible explanations for a broader audience.