User:Zvines/Delgado Drive/Ajohn128 Peer Review

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Your lead is beautifully done. You get right into the meat and potatoes when it comes to The "who where and why" of your street. You speak of the major sections of the community and you begin a little of the origin story. Your organization so far is great. However, I'd just be careful to ensure that you aren't redundant when moving on to other sections after your introduction. Now as for your media and images you've added a few I see. But the photos don't have descriptions. I don't know if you're saving them for last or not, but don't forget to make sure you cite them as well as describe what's being shown. Your tone is neutral so I'd be sure to keep it that way. I do have a question on your demographic sections. Do you plan to express more about the schools? I didn't know if you didn't want to mention the HBCUs or the other colleges with hopes of keeping the direction on the street or not. If that's the case I think it'd be nice to add maybe a list of the schools and link them to their wiki page. So far you have 3 sources so you're good in that area. I'd definitely just keep drafting how you have been. You only need minor tweaks to add onto your article. Keep up the good work!