User:Zvines/Delgado Drive/Smcoulter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zvines


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zvines/Delgado Drive


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Zvines/Delgado Drive

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article is pretty interesting. I like how you included the home prices, I have not seen that in an article before. I would provide more information on the houses to make your article stand out. Also there is not much history provided in the article. The schools section is a good part as well, but I would put more information and maybe a picture of the school to see what it looks like. I think the intro and demographics part is good, I wouldn't change anything about that. If possible I would try to do some research about apartments near Delgado drive as well. But overall it is a good article.