User:Zwiles95/Transgenerational stress inheritance/Alexcrocker12345 Peer Review

This article did a good job of explaining what transgenerational stress inheritance is and how it can be caused. I would recommend adding a link to the HPA axis. When talking about animal studies it was a good layout with subtitles but where are the studies on humans? It needs some for about human studies with some articles with advice. Under stress inheritance in humans is long and had many big words that needed links to help explain this topic better.

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