User:ZyrettiSpaghetti/Theseus /Jocfitzgerald Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZyrettiSpaghetti


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZyrettiSpaghetti/Theseus_?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Theseus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review: Your article is a super fascinating topic!

The lead in the article was good. It provided helpful information and didn't give away what the whole article was about. You could maybe cut some of the minotaur part out, since it goes into more detail about the battle later.

The article does have a clear and fluid structure. Although you do not have to be stuck to that structure either, after the birth and early years the next few sections are flexible and could be moved around if you deemed appropriate. It should end with his later years and death though.

I do believe your article does provide balanced coverage. Everything in the article is relevant to the topic. One thing I was confused about was the 6 Labours, maybe you could add more information to help readers understand what those are. Also the Ship of Theseus could use some more information.

The article does contain neutral content, highlighting good and bad aspects of Theseus. It is not one sided, or glorifying Theseus. There are clear facts within each section. In the lead section of the article it does state "Some people say..." when describing who Theseus' father was.

I wasn't able to pull up your sources, the links in your citations weren't working. But, I can see you got your sources from the YC library database, which is a reliable place for sources. The sources already added to the article all work and are good quality sources.