User:Zzzzzjessica/Doubanjiang/Runhan Hou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zzzzzjessica


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzzzjessica/Doubanjiang?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Doubanjiang

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead has not been updated. It is a concise lead that contains introductory sentence and a brief description of articles major sections.All information in the Lead is present in the article.

Content: The content added is relevant to the topic and the content added up is up to date. The contents addressed are not overrepresented or underrepresented to other topics. There is no missing content but add up content.

Tone: The content added is neutral and there is no biased claims.

Sources and References: I think all new content is backed up by a reliable source and the content added reflect accurate information in the article cited.

Organization: the new content is well organized and the writing and grammar is good.

Image and Media: there is no image/media added to this article.