User:Zzzzzjessica/Doubanjiang/Xuming Li Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Zzzzzjessica


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzzzjessica/Doubanjiang?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Doubanjiang

Lead
The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer. The Lead include an introductory sentence that clearly describes the article's topic, and also includes a brief description of the article's major sections. The Lead does not include information that is not present in the article. The Lead is concise.

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic and is also up-to-date. The content does not miss any content. The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. It does not address topics related to historically underreoresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral. There are no claims that appear too heavily biased toward a particular position. There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented. The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and References
The new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The content accurately reflect what the cited sources say. The sources are thorough. The sources are current. The sources are not written by a diverse spectrum of authors. There are some better sources available. My peer only uses one source, which is too simple. The link works. The sources can be more diverse since the only source is in Chinese. By choosing some articles from authors who wrote in English, it helps to create a better perspective for the information.

Organization
The content added is easy to read and concise, but the translation can be better. The sentence structure can be improved. The word choice can be better, such as "go bad" - deteriorate. The content does not have any spelling errors. The content can be organized into separate paragraphs, such as breaking down into little sections with some more information.

Images and Media
My peer does not add any new image or media.