User talk:בילי

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Garcia Gensel (February 10)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 12:43, 10 February 2016 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hey, I've been trying to get help through teahouse and other places to improve my article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:John_Garcia_Gensel I have done my best to change the tone of the article, but would appreciate specific advise on any needed changes so I can have it accepted. I don't want to waste editor time by resubmitting it if there are obvious flaws that will bring to another rejection. Thank you בילי (talk) 22:03, 10 February 2016 (UTC)


 * I don't see any serious issues with this draft. Onel5969 may want to comment on what they saw as problematic. Huon (talk) 07:33, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi - This editor has left requests at several places, and been answered by several editors. I left my response on the talk page of his draft, and am now backing away from this article.  Onel 5969  TT me 12:45, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Garcia Gensel has been accepted
 John Garcia Gensel, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! LaMona (talk) 17:05, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
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