User talk:유신예

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AfC notification: Draft:Luoyang, one of the four ancient capitals of China has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Luoyang, one of the four ancient capitals of China. Thanks! KylieTastic (talk) 18:24, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

some advices
Overall, the content of this article is quite thorough, covering various aspects of the topic. However, there is room for improvement in the use and explanation of technical terms. Currently, the article employs a large number of technical terms, but some of these lack clear definitions and background information, which might confuse non-expert readers. To make the article more accessible to a broader audience, it is recommended to provide concise definitions when technical terms first appear, and add relevant background information or examples when necessary. This would not only enhance the readability of the article but also help readers better understand and grasp the discussed content, thereby improving the overall quality and impact of the article.

您 整体而言，这篇文章内容较为翔实，涵盖了主题的各个方面. 然而，在专业术语的使用和解释上还有进一步提升的空间. 当前，文章中使用了大量专业术语，但部分术语缺乏明确的解释和背景说明，可能会让非专业读者感到困惑. 为了让更多读者理解，建议在首次出现专业术语时提供简明的定义，并在必要时添加相关背景信息或实例. 这不仅能提高文章的可读性，也能帮助读者更好地掌握和理解所讨论的内容，从而提升整篇文章的质量和影响力. Muqing112233 (talk) 04:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)