User talk:0036.Oct/sandbox

I think that this is very informative and a great start, although i think there needs to be a starting sentence that is bold, or maybe even an introduction. and also headings on each paragraph, to make it easier to read. I think that pictures would make the article more intriguing to read. There is a lot of information included, but there needs to be citations. --Caraghyoung (talk) 10:09, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

There are some good points here, nevertheless, there is a need to add citations and to work on the proper format so that the article is up to Wikipedia standards. I believe the article needs a bit more work, you are on your way --CKuhnH (talk) 17:59, 8 January 2020 (UTC)