User talk:103.217.166.122

May 2020
Hello, I'm Donner60. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Lachlan Macquarie, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Donner60 (talk) 02:15, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
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Please do not remove content or templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Lachlan Macquarie, without giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your content removal does not appear to be constructive and has been reverted. If you only meant to make a test edit, please use the sandbox for that. Thank you. —valereee (talk) 12:35, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
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Lachlan Macquarie
Hey, let's discuss these on the article talk at Talk:Lachlan Macquarie. It's good to add sources, but what you've added is Macquarie's diary and another source that puts 'hostile natives' in quotes, which likely means Macquarie himself called them that. 'Murdering' and 'good relations' is also problematic, as it's editorializing and possibly also in Macquarie's words. Finally, we need to add the information about travelling long distances and giving breakfast and tobacco with consensus into the section rather than the lead, then gain consensus that it's important enough for the lead. —valereee (talk) 13:30, 25 May 2020 (UTC)