User talk:104.220.66.241

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dan Raveh (January 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by EBY3221 was:

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EBY (talk) 04:07, 8 January 2015 (UTC)