User talk:107.198.184.225

Peer review
Hi!

I find the Wikipedia training a bit confusing as well and I'm not sure if it matters, but you put the article edits in the Bibliography section when I believe it should only be in the Sandbox draft area! Here! If I'm not mistaken, the bibliography should only be the links to your sources. In terms of your sources, they look great! The only thing is for #3, would you happen to have a link to the article or reading?

In terms of your contribution to the article, I do notice a few grammar mistakes that you can actually run through Grammarly. Also, I observed that you put a few opinion pieces in the contribution: "They should give a chance to use their mind to feel independent and dominant for once." However, I personally think that should not include opinions on your Wikipedia page. (As much as I completely agree with that sentence!)

I think you can also help organize the article by adding sub-sections about specific topics that you will be discussing. For example: This Wikipedia about cats has a section for contents: Characteristics of cats, senses of cats, etc.