User talk:109.255.71.103

Peacock language
It appears you have edited only a few articles here and it has been years since you were here, but in the event you return, allow me to assist you in your editing in keeping with Wikipedia style. In the Ray McKinnon article, you wrote "In 2011, McKinnon joined the cast of FX's critically acclaimed Sons of Anarchy." You offered no source for that information. At Wikipedia, editors are not authors. We do not originate information. We find sources for the information, paraphrase what is in the source and then provide a proper citation. Please write only content which has a proper respectable third-party source and provide a citation for the source. Also, you wrote that Sons of Anarchy was "critically acclaimed." Says who? You are in no position to determine something is "critically acclaimed." If you are going to write that, it must be sourced. Otherwise, it is what Wikipedia called "peacock language." One last thing: it appears that all of the edits you have made have been reverted. Please review those so you don't make the same mistakes. One important rule you should know is that you watching a television program is not a proper source. A source must be published, not aired. I hope this helps. All the best. MarydaleEd (talk) 23:42, 3 May 2023 (UTC)