User talk:118.69.62.209

July 2020
Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, your addition of one or more external links to the page Sawayama has been reverted. Your edit here to Sawayama was reverted by an automated bot that attempts to remove links in references which are discouraged per our reliable sources guideline. The reference(s) you added or changed (https://www.discogs.com/Rina-Sawayama-Sawayama/release/15203675) is/are on my list of links to remove and probably shouldn't be included in Wikipedia. If you were trying to insert an external link that does comply with our policies and guidelines, then please accept my creator's apologies and feel free to undo the bot's revert. However, if the link does not comply with our policies and guidelines, but your edit included other, constructive, changes to the article, feel free to make those changes again without re-adding the link. Please read Wikipedia's external links guideline for more information, and consult my list of frequently-reverted sites. For more information about me, see my FAQ page. Thanks! --XLinkBot (talk) 13:55, 7 July 2020 (UTC) If this is a shared IP address, and you didn't make the edit, please ignore this notice.

Hello. Some of your recent genre changes have conflicted with our neutral point of view and/or verifiability policies. While we invite all users to contribute constructively to Wikipedia, we urge all editors to provide reliable sources for edits made. When others disagree, we recommend you seek consensus for certain edits by discussing the matter on the article's talk page. Thank you. 2402:1980:8313:3697:D623:BE00:29D:D6A8 (talk) 17:37, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

Neutral wording
Hi, thanks for your additions to the page for Paula Abdul's "Straight Up". While much of the information you have included in your edit is valid, some of the wording could be deemed to have a non-neutral point of view, e.g. using expressions such as "a breakthrough success", "further catapulting its parental album", "before it finally reached number one after a record-setting 64 weeks on the market". This reads to me more like a press release or fan site than an encyclopedic entry. You might try using more neutral/detached language, such as "was her first top 40 hit", "resulting in the album climbing the chart until it eventually reached number one, spending 64 weeks in the top 10, which was a record at the time." Citing sources to support your claims would be even better. You may like to take a look at this page for some tips on how to ensure the text you add has a neutral tone to it.Nqr9 (talk) 12:39, 15 July 2020 (UTC)