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A few issues: 23:38, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Before anything, ensure you read WP:Notability (music) to ensure she meets those requirements
 * The tone is way too WP:Promotional; you absolutely cannot write as though you are advertising her. You must be WP:Neutral.
 * You list some news sources at the bottom, but you must turn them into proper WP:Footnotes and place them by the facts they support

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 02:06, 8 July 2013 (UTC)