User talk:11r010fkme

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September 2014
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 * The following is the log entry regarding this message: Sphinx was changed by 11r010fkme (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.95136 on 2014-09-24T12:50:58+00:00 . Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 12:51, 24 September 2014 (UTC)

Your addition to Raum has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text, or images borrowed from other websites, or printed material without a verifiable license; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images&mdash;you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. Ian.thomson (talk) 14:38, 24 September 2014 (UTC)

How to summarize and paraphrase
You already know how to WP:CITE a reliable source, but you need to learn to summarize and paraphrase. Copying and pasting material from a book is usually regarded as plagiarism, or stealing the writing. Summarizing involves shortening the source text to its main points. Paraphrasing involves using different words that have the same meaning. For example, the first paragraph of Cat could be summarized and paraphrased like "Cats are carnivore mammals, often kept as pets, that are known for hunting vermin." Ian.thomson (talk) 14:53, 24 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Read WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE also. Just a few word changes won't be enough. And what you added about the Sphinx wouldn't belong in the article in any case. Dougweller (talk) 16:57, 24 September 2014 (UTC)