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Cho Won's peer review
It's an overall great article to work on. I would like to suggest that you should add some details to it. It would be better to add some related articles! Notable CFO's can also be added some more since there are lots of them. Great job!

Cho Won's peer review
In this article, technology and society's relationship has been firmly written. Honestly, it has every information related to this topic, so I recommend finding real-life examples to add on. It's an overall great article to work on. Great job!