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User:123lookatmrlee/China Clark: Playwright, Philosopher
Hi there I have had a look at the draft and agree that it's not yet ready to go live. It is far to chatty and conversational and reads like a website or PR blurb. It maybe a good idea to read through the guidelines - see links on your talk page and look at some other biographies to get a feel for them - see Alan Brooke, 1st Viscount Alanbrooke for instance. It should be factual and from a neutral point of view, The references should added where appropriate using. Hope this helps  Brookie :) { - like the mist, he's here and then gone!}  (Whisper...) 08:40, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

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